An Arrow Through The Air

"I am afraid of...growing old too soon, of having my body worn out before my soul is past childhood...I shiver at the thought of losing my strength before I have found [it]; to have my senses fail ere I have a stock of rational pleasures, my blood cold ere my heart is warmed with virtue! Strange, to look back on a train of years that have passed, 'as an arrow through the air,' without leaving any mark behind them, without our being able to trace them in our improvement!" John Wesley

Wednesday, April 4, 2012

The Candy Store Generation – Second Version of Cover

My friend from Suite101 who is doing this cover for me seems to be enjoying herself. I gave her some comments, including those you all gave me on this blog last week, and she has come up with this revision.

Whaddaya think?

Here's a link to the first draft, in case you didn't see it or just want to see it again.

3 comments:

Joe PoteApril 4, 2012 at 2:48 PM
I like it!

Eye-catching, and let's the reader know, immediately, what the book is about.
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storyweaverApril 4, 2012 at 3:47 PM
There you go, Dave. Very nice. Just what it needed.
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UnknownApril 5, 2012 at 6:24 AM
I like it, too. The subtitle, of course, makes it clear what the book is about, but the dollar signs on the white jellybeans give it that little extra something. :)
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